Thursday, 2 March 2017

Dragons and other magical creatures

We have been using descriptive language to describe dragons and other magical creatures. Take a look. Titiro!

Dragon
Drip! Drop!......Drip! Drop! The deadly dragon’s cave was a cold wet shadow looming like a robber. It was as dark as a vivid and as stony as a long snaky pathway to a haunted house.
The dragon had a tail as sharp as a rusty old pitch fork. His skin was a jagged jigsaw with heaps of pieces missing. He had a red scaly back with flaky black bumpy bits crouched on top.
His eyes were glowing red fiery rubies staring down fiercely at its prey.
Ella Fraser

Puffball
Puffball is the cutest thing ever. He has a little bow. He is a cloud going through the air. His little legs are very skinny. Whenever he goes past a thing that looks tasty to eat he goes after it. His nose is like a picked bone. He lies in a big dark cave. The cave is like an enormous wet waterfall. His wavy whiskers are like a forest. The only place you can find him is with a cute lady.
Sophie

Dragon
Splutter! Splutter! Went the motor bike as I entered the cave in fear. As I entered the cave I saw that my armour didn’t fit, so I had to change. I entered the cave and saw a hideous looking dragon. He had a scaly back like a stegosaurus that looked like it needed a doctor’s appointment. Instead of an angry dragon and a bad dragon, he was even worse. Flames started to show in his mouth and a burst of fire came out. Then he flew away.
Gracie

The Minotaur
The only place you will find the Minotaur is the deep, dark, dead-animal forest. One day I went looking for the creature. In a cave in the forest there were bones. It was in there and it looked like it was half bull and half goat. Then it bit my head off.
Vadim


Dragon
It was a cold, gloomy night and all the dragons were resting their heads except for the most fierce one – the water dragon. He’s the one that sleeps in the day.
Zoom! Crash! Bang! Ahhh! The dragon swooped past like lightning. His legs were an old, worn out rollercoaster. His wings were lizard skin dipped in the ocean.
As the night turned to the bright sky he tried to get home as fast as he could to check that all his diamonds and treasure were safe.
Adrianna


Dragon
Poof! Fizz! Went the little dragon. It was as big as a strawberry bush. She was as soft as a purple kitten’s fur.
Little puffs of yellow smoke were like the islands of Sobindale, the village that is always brown and crying. Her eyes were as pink as a glittery flamingo. The fur on her wings was having a disco party as she soared as fast as a torpedo crashing down over Sobindale.
Her teeth were as white as paper and her tail as long as a tree in the forest of Sobindale. The trees were hanging down like arrows because of all the pollution. The little dragon was as big as a castle.
Her cave was lime green and humongous, to fit in the dragon and all her toys. She cooked marshmallows with her sky blue lake of acid flames. Her smile was as big as a crescent cheese.
Sophia


Dragon
I tiptoed up to the cave. It was dark like a night with no moon or stars and it was dry and definitely huge.
The dragon had scales as big as a tyre. They were smooth like armour made to fit anything. They were a shiny, newly made coin. It was red and gold like the sun rising into the desert sands.
Jacquie

Dragon
The dragon’s black tail was a spiky trident, poking everything in sight. It was flaky and pitch black like it had been mining coal all day long. He had delicate bat wings tucked up under the shining stolen goods. They had spiders emerging under them attached like sharks. His belly was a red hot raging ball of fire, fizzing and popping under his thick, dark, scaly skin. Suddenly one raging red ruby eye opened and I could smell choking smoke filling the air with his wings going swish as they flew up like a kite. He moved so loudly it sounded like a lightning strike ringing in my ears.

Molly.

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